It all took place on my friends farm . My friend Eben father was a scientist. He tried to go to other planets but everybody thought he was crazy. Eben was so sporty, I love to play awesome games that he made up. Well anyway back to his father.
When his father was doing the planet thing he was so tired that he fell asleep. He dropped to the ground and the machine he was making broke but what he didn’t know was that he made a black hole.
After he woke up everything was on fire. He ran as fast as the wind out of his science shed, he was so sad. The fire went out some how but it wasn’t a windy day. The black hole suked out the fire then it was as big as a pencil.
Eben’s father pulled the black hole with a stick all the way to his garage.
He knew he had put it somewhere safer but it was too late. The black hole sucked his house,Eben’s dad, town,city,country,the whole world but nobody noticed the small stuff that the black hole took but it took a day to get all the stuff . It took us all the way to another planet bulb because it had that sign when we came there. It had redis ground.
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This is a very imaginative piece of writing. I must admit to not being able to follow some of the ideas. I would love it if you could describe some of the characters a little more. Or have they disappeared forever into the black hole?
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