I enjoyed reading the detail that you have added to every page, Eze. You are also using speech effectively to add to the story. I can tell that you enjoyed creating this.
Thank you for taking me on this journey. Do you know why the stone man is made of stone? Was he always made of stone? I love the way your story has a happy ending. Excellent use of speech marks.
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I enjoyed reading the detail that you have added to every page, Eze. You are also using speech effectively to add to the story. I can tell that you enjoyed creating this.
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking me on this journey. Do you know why the stone man is made of stone? Was he always made of stone? I love the way your story has a happy ending. Excellent use of speech marks.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.