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Monday, May 25, 2015

5SC week 6

A knight was walking through the woods.To get a powerful sword.Later  he fell in a pit.Trees came alive and went into the pit.He wished he never came.

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  3. Hi Eze.
    I read your story and it sounds good but it need some more to it.

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