Camp letter

We are learning to : Write a letter to a camp parent or camp leader

Use paragraphs for each new idea

Use interesting words

Edit our writing with a buddy to make it even better

Reflect on our writing using a rubric

Dear Rochelle,

Hi, my name is Eze. I am from Yaldhurst Model School. You won’t remember me but I did tree climbing with you for camp and I had the Elder wand. I would like to thank you for coming to camp and I had a great time.

My top one  favourite part at camp was the hydro slide it was so fun and the super bowl made me a bit dizzy. I also enjoyed tree climbing. I got to the top of one trees but not to the top of the tree were you were. Orienteering  I really enjoyed  at camp we did really good at getting 390 points and it was cool getting lost to get number 25. The Paint game was my top two favourite thing at camp. I only got three different colours and only went in my home base two times.

I would really like to ask you a couple of question. Did you like the food at camp ? What was your favorite activity at camp? Are you going to camp again ? Did you have a good time camp ? Were you tired after the hike ?  Did you like the hot pools?  

Once again I would like to thank you for coming on camp. I really had a great time and I hope you did to. I really enjoyed having you on camp . I hope you go to camp again. You are awesome !

Yours sincerely

Eze

Rat Names

Pick a Story

It all started when I went to an abandoned house on Lakewood Rd. I went with a couple of friends . I had a sick feeling in my stomach but I didn’t want to be called a scaredy cat so I had to go in first.

Then a big vampire jumped out the door and I was too slow to run away. All my friends ran away because they were behind me.

Sadly the vampire bit me and I was forced to stay in the abandoned house because if I went out in public people would definitely kill me. The next day I got used to being a vampire. I had lots of power but the only thing I didn’t like was that I couldn't go out in sunlight. I missed playing outside and because I was angry at the vampire that bit me, I killed him with a wooden stick when he was asleep. I then didn’t have anything to do so I flew around the abandoned  house  as a bat. I came to a picture and it was crooked so I put it straight.

Out of the blue the wall the picture was on opened and there  were lots of potions. After the wall opened I saw all the cool potions like how to turn into a ghost and how to fly. Then I found this potion that was labeled how to turn into human and I thought if I drank it I would turn into a human again but I didn’t drink it straight from the bottle because it looked a bit old. So as I was walking to the kitchen in the abandoned house I tripped over a piece of wood and I fell on the dead vampire body and the potion spilt all over him. Then the dead vampire came back to life as a zombie which does make sense. I ran back to the picture and made it crooked so the zombie didn’t follow me inside the potion room. I found this potion that said how to turn into a ghost and drank it. Then I turned into a ghost and went through the wall and went inside the zombie and found the potion inside of him. 

In the end I drank the potion inside the zombie which was gross but worth it because I turned into a human again and the zombie died.

I ran to my house and my Mum and Dad said, “Where were you?”.

I just said “I was at a sleepover.”

                                                            

I am poem