We are learning to : Write a letter to a camp parent or camp leader
Use paragraphs for each new idea
Use interesting words
Edit our writing with a buddy to make it even better
Reflect on our writing using a rubric
Dear Rochelle,
Hi, my name is Eze. I am from Yaldhurst Model School. You won’t remember me but I did tree climbing with you for camp and I had the Elder wand. I would like to thank you for coming to camp and I had a great time.
My top one favourite part at camp was the hydro slide it was so fun and the super bowl made me a bit dizzy. I also enjoyed tree climbing. I got to the top of one trees but not to the top of the tree were you were. Orienteering I really enjoyed at camp we did really good at getting 390 points and it was cool getting lost to get number 25. The Paint game was my top two favourite thing at camp. I only got three different colours and only went in my home base two times.
I would really like to ask you a couple of question. Did you like the food at camp ? What was your favorite activity at camp? Are you going to camp again ? Did you have a good time camp ? Were you tired after the hike ? Did you like the hot pools?
Once again I would like to thank you for coming on camp. I really had a great time and I hope you did to. I really enjoyed having you on camp . I hope you go to camp again. You are awesome !
Yours sincerely
Eze
Excellent letter Eze. I like the way you have outlined what you enjoyed on camp. I also like the way you ask interesting questions. Have you considered setting up an orienteering course at YMS? Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteNice work Ez. It is always important to say thank you to people who help you. I'm sure the camp parents had as much fun as you! I wonder if they will go to next year's camp too?
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