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Monday, May 11, 2015

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Bad weather is cold bad and awful. People need to put the fire on and people outside need to get their rain jackets. It looks like trees falling down. It sounds like heavy wind. Some people can sometimes die in bad weather.

2 comments:

  1. Great thinking Eze. You have really covered a range of thoughts and ideas in 5 sentences. A great first challenge.

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  2. Hi Eze. Great to see you blogging. There are some great ideas here but I struggle to read the bright blue against the red background. Bad weather means we can stay inside and read.

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